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How can someone make me feel like this?
The way my heartbeat quickens with every kiss
Remembering the way you always gently stroke my face
And all signs of unhappiness are suddenly erased

Thinking of how we first met
That moment, I'll never forget
When I saw you smile at me
All my emotions ran wild and free
You were the object, my magical key

I hope you don't find it too revealing
If I ever tell you how I'm really feeling
Because I don't think I could ever stand losing you
You mean too much to me, it's true

I had always hoped we'd be together
I hope our love lasts forever
This is a poem I wrote quite quickly as I was feeling weird as I hadn't written one in a while (about 1 day....) But it's based on how true love feels and of how you never feel lonely when you're with that special someone.
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XxChibiBakaxX Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010
I wish His and My love lasted forever. I guess my love for him will :/
ForlornLover Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2005
I'm not too sure about the Trunks picture with this, even though I am a DBZ fan, but the poem was beautiful. I don't think I feel this way as much as I used to though, I still love this poem.
SaM-vS-cEnTuRy Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2005
lol yeah I used to always have a Trunks picture for my poems because I was so madly in love with him :D
Thanks for the comment :nod:
cherrygarden Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2004
ho.... trunks.... my dear...... ^_^
SaM-vS-cEnTuRy Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2004
ellyvdp Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2004
hey, nice poem
it's trunks
oh i remember the days i watched dragonball z
SaM-vS-cEnTuRy Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2004
Yeah I'm just in love with that cutie. Thanks by the way! :D
cheekymare3 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2004
wow thts one of the best i have tears in my eyes but it might just be the hayfever lol
lyam12 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2004
Very nice . you mite have 2 look at the second stanza as you say the word "you intead of him" as it kinda changes the poems viewpoint
BellKatie Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2004   Writer
Very good! You express that feeling well.
xWraithx Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2004
Well expressed! :clap: Well done :!: =)
actfairy Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2004   Writer
this is a great poem. I can really connect to it,if you know what I mean. You really capture those feelings. :clap:

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